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The Vain Rose II UNFINISHED

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Unfinished illustration for my short story, "The Vain Rose".
This is the irritatingly cheerful and naive girl who the poet leaves the rose for.

**HELP**
I have no idea how to finish this piece... I was thinking of having her hold an umbrella, or maybe have a tree branch poking out from the top right. I wanted to leave it just like this, but it looks so empty... Any suggestions would be appreciated greatly!

"A man was walking in the gardens, and beside him was a beautiful young girl, whose smile would lift the hearts of the most discontent, and whose eyes shone with radiance."
Image size
2126x2625px 1.89 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP pstc4100
Date Taken
Jan 3, 2009, 6:49:43 PM
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Luienmera's avatar
This is so beautiful! I think an umbrella sounds nice.. and if your going to have a branch, it might be best to also show the trunk of the tree- but i quite like the emptiness, so all your ideas are sounding good! :D